Excellent Explanations!

This morning we worked extremely hard on writing the introduction to our explanation text. Mrs Johanson and Mrs Barker had their magic pens and this helped us to remember our capital letters, conjunctions , technical vocabulary and punctuation to end our sentences.  Here are two examples of the outstanding work we have all produced.

By Zara
By Zara
By Charlie
By Charlie

Some of us were lucky enough to show our writing to Miss Duffy and lots of us Seesaw’ed our work.

 

3 thoughts on “Excellent Explanations!

  1. What great introductions, I can’t wait to read what comes next Zara and Charlie. I hope you’ll post some more!

  2. Thank you very much that is a very nice comment you sent us. We all worked very hard again today writing our next paragraph. From Cherry Class

  3. Well done Zara and Charlie, this really is some amazing writing. I am not surprised that Mrs Johanson is so proud of you. You have worked incredibly hard and I particularly like the way you have used your vocabulary.

    I really enjoyed reading this, thank you.

    Mr Rockey
    Headteacher, Westwood with Iford School

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