This morning we worked very hard on our story big writes. We watched a video of a boy who visits a museum to look at dinosaur fossils. It was up to us continue and finish the story.  Here are just a few of our superb sentences:

Suddenly a dart of light plummets onto James’ hand… (Molly)

…as he fled, the dinosaur got closer and closer… (Annie)

Suddenly Tom saw a creepy skeleton magically come to life! (Josh)

…the dino’s made a tactile decision to find and capture James… (Nicholas)

5 thoughts on “VCOP!

  1. Hello Cherry Class
    I wanted to say how much we (Lime C) enjoyed seeing the fantastic expanded addition you have been doing… Well done. We are looking forward to our next visit.

  2. Fantastic sentences Cherry Class! Molly and Skye told me all about your story big writes yesterday – they sound great fun!

  3. Wow those sentences are amazing! They really make me want to read some more to find out what happens next! Well done!

  4. Wow, Cherry Class these are super sentences! I can see you have worked particularly hard on using interesting vocabulary. I will be showing these to Maple Class Keep up the fantastic work!

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